Saturday, September 19, 2009

Night: Five

Crashing down
from the moon
the sea beats
that rock
in waves of frustration

Claws its shoulders
in panic against
the tug of faraway silver

covers its craggy face
in foam kisses

and leaves.

Again.

6 comments:

Guria said...

Oh my! I don't think any one has ever described tides as beautifully as you did!

http://whysoserioustoday.blogspot.com said...

not everyone has the ability to say so much in such few words ... u rock !!!

VISHNU said...

nice..

Sid 'Ravan' Kabe said...

oh wow...this is so cool!!!

PEOPLE, PLACES, VOICES, FACES... said...

Thanks, y'all! Peer appreciation means a lot! Makes it worthwhile.

RachelW said...

I love the moon, in all its manifestations. Add the sea, and you have a recipe for magic!